# What are three ways you can make your paragraph better in the revision process?

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## Solution 1

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Explanation:

Think honestly about your thesis: Do you still agree with it? Should it be modified in light of something you discovered as you wrote the paper? Does it make a sophisticated, provocative point, or does it just say what anyone could say if given the same topic? Does your thesis generalize instead of taking a specific position? Should it be changed altogether? For more information visit our handout on thesis statements.

Check the focus of the paper: Is it appropriate to the assignment? Is the topic too big or too narrow? Do you stay on track through the entire paper?

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Answer: I think it’s answer C, correct me if I’m wrong though.

Explanation: cause they are mad at him and all that, so I think the answer HAS to be a negative effect!

Solution 2

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### What is the correct sentence for lie and beside?

In addition to lying down, something else is also laid down. A direct object with lying is not required. Lay needs a present object. The same rule applies to lying as well as laying; be careful with your spelling.

The past simple is laid, whereas lying is the -ing form. I enjoy reading while lying on the beach. The -ed form, laid, is quite formal and rarely used. She was daydreaming as she laid on the bed and looked up at the ceiling.

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lay is used when you put something down flat while lie means to be in a flat position

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The actions that teenagers take to be able to have their phone at camp

The benefits of having phones at camp

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The reasons parents inquire about the rules against cell phones before sending their children to camp

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